[AA2] Wulfric's Tomb
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[AA2] Wulfric's Tomb
Here's the other one I managed to tidy up. Let me know your thoughts.
This adventure can be found in AA2 on the Downloads page.
This adventure can be found in AA2 on the Downloads page.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
Re-uploaded r1 with spelling corrections; also re-named all references to the DM as GM, as BFRPG uses that term.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
R2 uploaded to first post. Bit more polish added as this may go into AA2 with John's 2 other adventures.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
I don't know about version 9 yet, but I did do an edit of version 2.
Wulfric's Tomb Corrections
Page 2 – Orc stats
All the stats contain the weapon name in the damage area. The other adventures have the weapon name in the Attack area.
Currently:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6 (short bow/hand axe), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Suggest:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/hand axe, Dam 1d6, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Page 2 – Fern’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow should be shortbow to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Oaken’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow and short sword should be shortbow and shortsword to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Wilderness Encounters
Currently:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d4 (short sword/sling), Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Suggest:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 shortsword/sling, Dam 1d6/1d4, Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Currently:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d8 (short bow/sword), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Suggest:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/longsword, Dam 1d6/1d8, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Also in the Equipment section
Page 7 – Skeleton Ogre
Currently:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1, Dam 2d6 (giant warhammer), Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Suggest:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1 giant warhammer, Dam 2d6, Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Page 9
Stairway to 14 should use the up stairs indicator and the the ones going to 12 should use the downstairs indicator.
The numbers to the left should indicate 12 – 13 on the right it should indicate 14 – 16 and to the top 17-20, to indicate that there are more rooms in those directions.
Page 10
Crossroads and Storerooms – stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Queens’ Burial Chamber - stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Update proofreader list.
Wulfric's Tomb Corrections
Page 2 – Orc stats
All the stats contain the weapon name in the damage area. The other adventures have the weapon name in the Attack area.
Currently:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6 (short bow/hand axe), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Suggest:
3 Orcs: AC 14, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/hand axe, Dam 1d6, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 8
Page 2 – Fern’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow should be shortbow to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Oaken’s description
Spelling consistency with Core Rules has a couple of mentions of short bow and short sword should be shortbow and shortsword to match Core Rules spelling.
Page 3 – Wilderness Encounters
Currently:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d4 (short sword/sling), Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Suggest:
4 Goblins: AC 14, HD 1-1, #At 1 shortsword/sling, Dam 1d6/1d4, Mv 20’, Sv F1, Ml 7
Currently:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 weapon, Dam 1d6/1d8 (short bow/sword), Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Suggest:
3 Elves: AC 15, HD 1, #AT 1 shortbow/longsword, Dam 1d6/1d8, Mv 30’, Sv F1, Ml 10
Also in the Equipment section
Page 7 – Skeleton Ogre
Currently:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1, Dam 2d6 (giant warhammer), Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Suggest:
1 Skeleton Ogre: AC 15, HD 4+1, #AT 1 giant warhammer, Dam 2d6, Mv 40, Sv F4, Ml 12
Page 9
Stairway to 14 should use the up stairs indicator and the the ones going to 12 should use the downstairs indicator.
The numbers to the left should indicate 12 – 13 on the right it should indicate 14 – 16 and to the top 17-20, to indicate that there are more rooms in those directions.
Page 10
Crossroads and Storerooms – stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Queens’ Burial Chamber - stairs should indicate they go up to the right.
Update proofreader list.
Re: Wulfric's Tomb
Heh yeah meant R2. R3 uploaded to first post. Will need to work on editing the map images later.
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