BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
Re: BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
These are more "cosmetic" than vital.
Repeated use of "Attacks:" rather than "#At" in monster stat lines
Page 8
3. EAST ROOM:
should be: "3 Giant Rats:"
Page 9:
7. WARRIOR TRAINING ROOM:
s/b "3 Regular Kobolds:"
s/b "2 Kobold Guards:"
8. PANTRY:
s/b "5 Goblins:"
11. ANTEROOM:
s/b "2 Living Crystal Statues:"
page 11:
17. BUTCHER:
s/b "8 Giant Rats:"
page 15
30. GREAT HALL:
s/b "3 Orcs:"
Repeated use of "Attacks:" rather than "#At" in monster stat lines
Page 8
3. EAST ROOM:
should be: "3 Giant Rats:"
Page 9:
7. WARRIOR TRAINING ROOM:
s/b "3 Regular Kobolds:"
s/b "2 Kobold Guards:"
8. PANTRY:
s/b "5 Goblins:"
11. ANTEROOM:
s/b "2 Living Crystal Statues:"
page 11:
17. BUTCHER:
s/b "8 Giant Rats:"
page 15
30. GREAT HALL:
s/b "3 Orcs:"
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Re: BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
I'll try to get this taken care of this weekend.
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(Words used right after each other, best looked up with the search function): "The the" as in "The the fluid in the trough ..."
Re: BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
In R16 a check didn't bring up any such errors; can you give specific locations?
Re: BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
Page 1, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Page 7, 9-11 1d6 Giant Rates: extra space before closing parenthesis
Page 15, bottom left paragraph: extra space (with the urgoblin)
Page 16, Urgoblin: extra space (#At 1)
Page 22, 50. Sanctuary, first paragraph (non-boxed): extra space (water clock at the west)
Page 26, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Page 35, 1st paragraph: extra space (one of his platinum)
Page 44, 14. Count Down Trap, 1st paragraph: extra space (It is covered)
Still couldn't locate duplicate words (I'd have to do a full read-through); JD can you let us know the specific ones?
Page 7, 9-11 1d6 Giant Rates: extra space before closing parenthesis
Page 15, bottom left paragraph: extra space (with the urgoblin)
Page 16, Urgoblin: extra space (#At 1)
Page 22, 50. Sanctuary, first paragraph (non-boxed): extra space (water clock at the west)
Page 26, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Page 35, 1st paragraph: extra space (one of his platinum)
Page 44, 14. Count Down Trap, 1st paragraph: extra space (It is covered)
Still couldn't locate duplicate words (I'd have to do a full read-through); JD can you let us know the specific ones?
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Fixed. It was intentional, but justification makes it too big.chiisu81 wrote:Page 1, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Giant Rates? Like what I get from my credit card company?chiisu81 wrote:Page 7, 9-11 1d6 Giant Rates: extra space before closing parenthesis
Fixed.
Dang you have good eyes.chiisu81 wrote:Page 15, bottom left paragraph: extra space (with the urgoblin)
Again, dang good eyes.chiisu81 wrote:Page 16, Urgoblin: extra space (#At 1)
Fixed.chiisu81 wrote:Page 22, 50. Sanctuary, first paragraph (non-boxed): extra space (water clock at the west)
Intentional, left as is.chiisu81 wrote:Page 26, 1st paragraph: extra space after 1st sentence
Fixed.chiisu81 wrote:Page 35, 1st paragraph: extra space (one of his platinum)
Fixed.chiisu81 wrote:Page 44, 14. Count Down Trap, 1st paragraph: extra space (It is covered)
I'll push a new version to the server tomorrow (or rather, later today).
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So close to being finished!
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Um... I think you're on the wrong one. BF2 is in print. Are you thinking of Strongholds of Sorcery?
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Drat. Yes...
Re: BF2 Fortress, Tomb, and Tower
R18 released by Solo. Notes: "This release fixes a couple of very minor layout issues. It's still not a print release... I'm hoping to drum up some art to fill in some of the blank space, and maybe even show some of the NPCs."
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