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by AlMan
Tue Feb 23, 2021 7:04 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

That map looks great Borgar!!! I'll be using it, thank you!!!!
by AlMan
Thu Feb 18, 2021 9:37 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Watch NASA’s Perseverance Rover Land on Mars!
Replies: 3
Views: 239

Re: Watch NASA’s Perseverance Rover Land on Mars!

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First picture from Perseverance. Hopefully he doesn't find the Q-36 Space Modulator that NASA uses to get the rovers up to Mars. :D
by AlMan
Thu Feb 11, 2021 9:41 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

Page 13. "Fader Vineknock will tell the party to go to the mouth of the Grim River there is a logging concern and ships headed to Corvis stop to pick up loads of lumber." That should probably be 2 sentences. "There are two routes that ships will use one goes almost straight west and follows the nor...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 11, 2021 6:44 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

This is a really great little series of adventures. I love it! Well done sir. Thank you, Captain!! :D Also I would like to give you some credit, since I used some features of the Hexcrawl Adventures to build lairs that I've made so far, doing dice drops and getting some rooms and features for the l...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 11, 2021 6:35 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

Room 1. "the feeling fo being watched." should be "for". Actually I think it should be "of" instead of "for", my fingers are dyslexic that way. Also, if you see any "ot" it would probably be "to". Since this version of influenza is "magically enhanced" it would last longer. I'll wrap up all your co...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 11, 2021 1:07 am
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

Seven wrote: Wed Feb 10, 2021 9:56 pm It it's OK to just point out corrections.

Page 3. "sever heresy" should be "severe heresy".

"day light" could be "daylight".
Thank you, Seven, how do you want to be credited as a proofreader?
by AlMan
Mon Feb 08, 2021 10:46 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Re: Grimfall Quests

chiisu81 wrote: Fri Feb 05, 2021 8:27 am *opens document expecting a dozen pages or so*
This version is probably the fifth longest book if my page counts are correct, it would easily pass AA2 to be the fourth longest when it is finished.
by AlMan
Mon Feb 08, 2021 10:33 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Ruined Gates of Varos
Replies: 83
Views: 1779

Re: Ruined Gates of Varos

I uploaded R2 to the first post, with many of the things we've talked about including a start on the book (at the end of the module). Lots of descriptions left to write there, and I need to look over BF3 and JN2 and break up the entries for them. For JN2 the adventures marked with an 'R' are what I...
by AlMan
Sun Feb 07, 2021 10:24 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Ruined Gates of Varos
Replies: 83
Views: 1779

Re: Ruined Gates of Varos

Why not go to places that are similar level in the books we have out already? Basic Fantasy Adventure Anthology 1 has Merilla”s Magic Tower, The Zombraire’s Estate, Deathcrypt of Khaldhun, The Vault of Thaire, The Slaver’s Fortress, The Lost Tome. Basic Fantasy Adventure Anthology2 has The Dungeon o...
by AlMan
Thu Feb 04, 2021 3:13 pm
Forum: The Workshop
Topic: Grimfall Quests
Replies: 18
Views: 623

Grimfall Quests

Ladies and Gentleman, I present to you Grimfall Quests. This is a set of adventures that I thought up to explore more of the wider world of The Western Lands. I got about a little over half way and my creativity needs a rest, in other words I've got writers block. If anyone is willing to take a look...