Shadows of the Undercity

Post by **Solomoriah** » Wed Jul 08, 2020 12:17 am

Here's the small adventure I used back when I started my current campaign. I've been putting off sharing this until it's "done" but it's time to stop procrastinating. Enjoy!

Post by **AlMan** » Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:09 pm

Page 4 – 5. Tunnel – Paragraph 1
Was:
… the back wall is bare dirt with has a narrow tunnel dug into it.
Changed to:
… the back wall is bare dirt which has a narrow tunnel dug into it.

Page 6 – 11a. Tower Ground Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 2
Was:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed greatsword.
Changed to:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed great sword.

Added my name as Proofreader to Page 1.

Post by **AlMan** » Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:10 pm

Question about Shadows of the Undercity:
Page 7 – 11b. Tower Upper Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 1
Text says eight windows, map shows only four.
Currently:
There are no doors, but there are eight tall, narrow windows spaced evenly around the room.
Should be:
There are no doors, but there are four tall, narrow windows spaced evenly around the room.

Post by **Solomoriah** » Wed Jul 08, 2020 11:40 pm

Okay, I have this deja vu sensation... have I released this adventure before and forgotten it?

Gah. I'll have to do some looking. That whole 8 vs. 4 windows thing sounds familiar...

Post by **chiisu81** » Thu Jul 09, 2020 8:29 am

Doesn't ring a bell with me...

Post by **Solomoriah** » Thu Jul 09, 2020 4:57 pm

Well, the map is correct, anyway.

Post by **chiisu81** » Fri Jul 10, 2020 9:27 am

Possible for inclusion in AA3?

Post by **Solomoriah** » Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:13 pm

I hope so.

However, let's not sweep it in just yet. There's a lot of empty boxed text in there.

Post by **Solomoriah** » Fri Jul 10, 2020 5:23 pm

Just uploaded R4 with Al's changes as well as a correction to the number of windows and a very small amount of new boxed text.

Seven · Post by **Seven** » Fri Jul 10, 2020 8:18 pm

AlMan wrote: ↑Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:09 pm
Page 6 – 11a. Tower Ground Level – Boxed Text Paragraph 2
Was:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed greatsword.
Changed to:
Leaning against the wall beside him is an unsheathed great sword.

Added my name as Proofreader to Page 1.

I suppose there are no consensus on this, but as we use longsword and shortsword, I personally much prefer greatsword. It does contrast with axes where we use hand axe, battle axe and great axe.

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