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Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 5:28 pm
by chiisu81
Wow I missed both of those

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 10:52 pm
by AlMan
:oops:

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2019 11:08 pm
by Solomoriah
Grr...

:D

Announcing!

Basic Fantasy Equipment Emporium, Release 20 -- August 24, 2019
Martin Serena pointed out some flow issues with the previous release, leading directly to this new print release candidate.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html ... ntemporium

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2019 4:59 pm
by AlMan
Also make sure he gets a proofing credit.

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2019 10:44 am
by Solomoriah
Announcing!

Basic Fantasy Equipment Emporium, Release 21 -- August 26, 2019
This new print release candidate adds a missing proofing credit for Martin Serena, as well as a very small amount of added text in the Game Master's section.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html ... ntemporium

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2019 9:39 am
by chiisu81
p. 3, chain: should be "9+ gp" instead of "9 gp+"
p. 3, Greatclub & Sap/Blackjack: needs space in "price"
p. 4, Hand Crossbow: needs space in "price"
p. 9, Full Plate Mail: needs to be "1,500 gp"
p. 12, Trap, small animal: needs space in "cost"
p. 16, Prayer Book(Tome/Ornate): should be "250+ gp" instead of "250 gp+"
p. 17, Exotic Ingredients: should be "50+ gp" instead of "50 gp+"
p. 17, Toys, complex: should be "20+ gp" instead of "20 gp+"
p. 17, Standing Instruments: should be "20+ gp" instead of "20 gp+"
p. 22, last 3 outfits: should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Roc (both): should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Deer (both): should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Dog, Pet: needs space in "price"
p. 34, multiple: needs space in "price"
p. 36, Inn Lodging entries: needs space in "cost"
p. 37, column headings (incl. pint/glass/shot further down): should be capitalized
p. 38, Wood: needs space in cost, weight should be "5,000"
p. 38, Wine, Exceptional: should be "2,400+ gp"
p. 38, multiple: needs space in "price"
p. 39, multiple: needs space in "price", 4-figure prices need commas
p. 44, table, Siege Tower and Sow: needs space in "cost"

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2019 10:00 am
by teaman
By the way, thanks to ALL the authors and careful editors. My players LOVED this book.

The city gave them 3500 gold for capturing (alive) a dangerous sorceress. One of the players posted a link to the PDF and they went to town. I think they shopped for over a half-hour while I sat back and enjoyed the roleplaying and them discussing what a Carven Cleric might need, etc...

Thanks so much. You stretched my prep time out for me!

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2019 11:01 pm
by Solomoriah
chiisu81 wrote:
Tue Sep 03, 2019 9:39 am
p. 3, chain: should be "9+ gp" instead of "9 gp+"
Fixed it a different way.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 3, Greatclub & Sap/Blackjack: needs space in "price"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 4, Hand Crossbow: needs space in "price"
Fixed. Also noticed alignment of prices was inconsistent on 3 and 4, and fixed that.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 9, Full Plate Mail: needs to be "1,500 gp"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 12, Trap, small animal: needs space in "cost"
Fixed. Also, "price" vs. "cost." Headings should basically always be "price" except maybe for trade goods.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 16, Prayer Book(Tome/Ornate): should be "250+ gp" instead of "250 gp+"
Not thrilled with the plus sign at all. Fixed a different way.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 17, Exotic Ingredients: should be "50+ gp" instead of "50 gp+"
Fixed a different way. Also fixed "5 gp to X gp" instances to "5 to X gp" and put them on one line.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 17, Toys, complex: should be "20+ gp" instead of "20 gp+"
p. 17, Standing Instruments: should be "20+ gp" instead of "20 gp+"
p. 22, last 3 outfits: should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Roc (both): should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Deer (both): should be "xx+ gp" instead of "xx gp+"
p. 29, Dog, Pet: needs space in "price"
Fixed these consistent with previous measures.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 34, multiple: needs space in "price"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 36, Inn Lodging entries: needs space in "cost"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 37, column headings (incl. pint/glass/shot further down): should be capitalized
Fixed a bunch more than that, including separating mead from ales and ciders.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 38, Wood: needs space in cost, weight should be "5,000"
Fixed.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 38, Wine, Exceptional: should be "2,400+ gp"
Fixed another way.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 38, multiple: needs space in "price"
Fixed, I think.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 39, multiple: needs space in "price", 4-figure prices need commas
Think I fixed all of these.
chiisu81 wrote:p. 44, table, Siege Tower and Sow: needs space in "cost"
Fixed.

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2019 11:23 pm
by Solomoriah
Announcing!

Basic Fantasy Equipment Emporium, Release 22 -- September 03, 2019
James Lemon found a bunch more little details that needed fixed, and while fixing them Chris Gonnerman found even more and fixed them too. So, here's another print release candidate.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html ... ntemporium

Re: Equipment Emporium Supplement

Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2019 8:01 am
by borgar
I'm very happy to be a contributor the new releases.

Though I seem to have gone swedish in the EE now. I should be credited as "Borgar Olsen" (not Olson). It's correct in AA2 and CS1 btw.

Borgar