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Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 11:42 am
by Solomoriah
Thanks for the kind words, Snarky!

Chi: At your convenience, feel free to do a proofing pass over R1. Whenever you get that done (and there's no hurry, as usual), drop your R2 into the Projects folder and I'll do a little more of the layout-hammering. Then maybe we can get Al to take a look, and get an R3 out that way.

Since Al wrote one of the adventures, I'll give his adventure a proofing pass when you finish your first. It's hard to proof your own writing, so I won't ask it of him.

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 4:10 pm
by teaman
And the print release looks nice. Just downloaded it!

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 5:44 pm
by Solomoriah
Not a print copy yet, Teaman...

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 6:59 pm
by teaman
Solomoriah wrote:
Mon Oct 21, 2019 5:44 pm
Not a print copy yet, Teaman...
True. Also, if you can use any of my generic art as filler, have at it. I know that Gabeprime has drawn a lot of general art recently as well.

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 7:33 pm
by AlMan
Solomoriah wrote:
Mon Oct 21, 2019 11:42 am
Since Al wrote one of the adventures, I'll give his adventure a proofing pass when you finish your first. It's hard to proof your own writing, so I won't ask it of him.
Solo, I was looking through the r1 of The Dark Temple and noticed that you used r1 of my adventure, I have made some proofing passes on mine already and the the one that is currently attached to my post is r4 of Temple by the Sea. I will put a copy in the Dropbox folder.

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 9:33 pm
by Solomoriah
I pulled the ODTs out as I came to them; must have missed it. Sorry.

Chi, I'm integrating Al's adventure into an R2 and putting it in the Projects folder for you to review. Don't change the release number on it.

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2019 10:49 pm
by AlMan
Will this work as a blurb on page 2, for my adventure?

The old temple was destroyed as being heretical almost a millennia ago. What horrors did the old sect leave after their destruction?

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2019 12:23 am
by Solomoriah
Yeah, it's a start. The problem is if the blurb is too close to the intro, they'll all look alike. (Probably not surprising). I'll do blurbs for all of them, I just had one ready-made and went ahead and put it in.

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2019 7:16 am
by chiisu81
Just to check: is everyone else's entries their latest release in r2?

Re: The Dark Temple

Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2019 8:09 am
by Solomoriah
That was my intention. I pulled the last upload out of the thread for each of the six, but somehow missed Al's.