Temple of Healing
- John Dutton
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Temple of Healing
Please find attached an adventure called The Temple of Healing that I wrote for my group at school. I reckon it would be suitable for fairly low level characters, perhaps 3 to 5. I've run it twice now and it seems to work. It's not in the proper BFRPG format, but I have edited it so that it's useable. Its on Word and I've had a few problems with the maps changing the moment I take my eye off them. Anyway, I'd be grateful to hear your thoughts. Best wishes, JD.
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Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
Re-formatted with our adventure template, attached to first post.
Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
Welcome back John, be sure to check out Adventure Anthology 3, I think you'll like what the first two adventures are.
- John Dutton
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Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
That's wonderful. It's absolutely made my day.
It's good to be back, although I've never been far away. I've been constantly popping onto the site to download character sheets and adventures (my group loved the Tomb of the Mummy Priest and Underneath the Temple). I also like the look of the Carven character class although I haven't had a chance to use it yet. Really nice artwork too.
It's good to be back, although I've never been far away. I've been constantly popping onto the site to download character sheets and adventures (my group loved the Tomb of the Mummy Priest and Underneath the Temple). I also like the look of the Carven character class although I haven't had a chance to use it yet. Really nice artwork too.
Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
I've posted R2 to the Projects folder. Here is what I changed:
Page 1 – Boxed text – Paragraph 3
Americanized spellings
Was:
… honour …
Changed to:
… honor …
Page 2 – L1.3: Statue Room Boxed Text and L1.5: Unsafe Corridor Boxed Text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 2 – L1.5: Unsafe Corridor – Paragraph 1
Was:
As she couldn’t go any further, she had resigned herself to returning to Heraclon when a door appeared magically appeared in the south wall and the characters stepped through.
Changed to:
As she couldn’t go any further, she had resigned herself to returning to Heraclon, when a door magically appeared in the south wall and the characters stepped through.
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Boxed Text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Boxed Text
Was:
In the center of the north wall is a third door, but to your surprise, it is only12” high.
Changed to:
In the center of the north wall is a third door, but to your surprise, it is only12 inches high.
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Paragraph 1
Was:
The door leads to a 10’ long corridor which, like the door, is 12” high.
Changed to:
The door leads to a 10 foot long corridor which, like the door, is 12 inches high.
Page 3 – L1.8: Heraclon – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
(2)… centre … and (1) … armoured …
Changed to:
(2)… center … and (1) … armored …
Page 3 – L1.8: Heraclon – Boxed text
Was:
The river is about 10’ wide and 3’ deep and contains 2 albino crocodiles.
Changed to:
The river is about 10 feet wide and 3 feet deep and contains 2 albino crocodiles.
Page 4 – River – Paragraph 2
Americanized spellings
Was:
… learnt …
Changed to:
… learned …
Page 4 – L1.9: Pit Chamber – Boxed text
Was:
The bronze doors swing open and you find yourselves looking into large rectangular chamber.
Changed to:
The bronze doors swing open and you find yourselves looking into a large rectangular chamber.
Page 4 – L1.9: Pit Chamber – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 4 – L2.1: Bottom of the Pit: - Paragraph 1
Was:
… 20’ …
Changed to:
… 20 feet …
Page 4 – L2.3: Frozen Pool – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 5 – L2.6a: Forest Cave – Boxed text
Was:
… travelled …
Changed to:
… traveled …
Page 6 – L2.6c: Apple Tree: - Paragraph 2
Was:
… 10’ …
Changed to:
… 10 feet …
Since it is being printed on this side of the pond, I Americanized the spelling of words like centre to center and armoured to armored. Also to avoid confusion of the marks ' and " for feet and inches in places that use metric, the marks were changed to 'feet' and 'inches' respectively.
Page 1 – Boxed text – Paragraph 3
Americanized spellings
Was:
… honour …
Changed to:
… honor …
Page 2 – L1.3: Statue Room Boxed Text and L1.5: Unsafe Corridor Boxed Text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 2 – L1.5: Unsafe Corridor – Paragraph 1
Was:
As she couldn’t go any further, she had resigned herself to returning to Heraclon when a door appeared magically appeared in the south wall and the characters stepped through.
Changed to:
As she couldn’t go any further, she had resigned herself to returning to Heraclon, when a door magically appeared in the south wall and the characters stepped through.
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Boxed Text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Boxed Text
Was:
In the center of the north wall is a third door, but to your surprise, it is only12” high.
Changed to:
In the center of the north wall is a third door, but to your surprise, it is only12 inches high.
Page 3 – L1.6: Tiny Door Room – Paragraph 1
Was:
The door leads to a 10’ long corridor which, like the door, is 12” high.
Changed to:
The door leads to a 10 foot long corridor which, like the door, is 12 inches high.
Page 3 – L1.8: Heraclon – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
(2)… centre … and (1) … armoured …
Changed to:
(2)… center … and (1) … armored …
Page 3 – L1.8: Heraclon – Boxed text
Was:
The river is about 10’ wide and 3’ deep and contains 2 albino crocodiles.
Changed to:
The river is about 10 feet wide and 3 feet deep and contains 2 albino crocodiles.
Page 4 – River – Paragraph 2
Americanized spellings
Was:
… learnt …
Changed to:
… learned …
Page 4 – L1.9: Pit Chamber – Boxed text
Was:
The bronze doors swing open and you find yourselves looking into large rectangular chamber.
Changed to:
The bronze doors swing open and you find yourselves looking into a large rectangular chamber.
Page 4 – L1.9: Pit Chamber – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 4 – L2.1: Bottom of the Pit: - Paragraph 1
Was:
… 20’ …
Changed to:
… 20 feet …
Page 4 – L2.3: Frozen Pool – Boxed text
Americanized spellings
Was:
… centre …
Changed To:
… center …
Page 5 – L2.6a: Forest Cave – Boxed text
Was:
… travelled …
Changed to:
… traveled …
Page 6 – L2.6c: Apple Tree: - Paragraph 2
Was:
… 10’ …
Changed to:
… 10 feet …
Since it is being printed on this side of the pond, I Americanized the spelling of words like centre to center and armoured to armored. Also to avoid confusion of the marks ' and " for feet and inches in places that use metric, the marks were changed to 'feet' and 'inches' respectively.
Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
Only one suggestion
Page 8 – Room 5
The stairs need to indicate that the stairs go down from top to bottom.
Page 8 – Room 5
The stairs need to indicate that the stairs go down from top to bottom.
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Re: Temple of Healing Adventure
I uploaded Al's R2 here, mainly to get it out of the Projects folder.
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