AA1 Adventure Anthology One - German Translation

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AA1 Adventure Anthology One - German Translation

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The first german version of Adventure Anthology One (AA1) has been published in the showcase now.
I would appreciate any kind of feedback on the translation or on any errors.
Please post your comments about the german version in this post.

https://www.basicfantasy.org/showcase.cgi?user=2832
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Hallo, HeptorColeslaw!

Hier ist die erste partielle Korrektur bis Seite 32, d.h., die ersten vier Abenteuer sind einmal korrigiert. Es handelt sich hauptsächlich um Kleinigkeiten sowie wenige Anmerkungen.
AA1-Adventure-Anthology-One-r21-de3_Korrektur-v1.odt
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Vielen Dank für Deine Übersetzungsarbeit!
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Hey, if you translate something from the Downloads page, when you have a complete translation (even if it's not print-ready) please notify me directly so I can add it on that page. Yeah, I should notice it here more quickly, but even I have limits...
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I just noticed, that the version on the downloads page is not the corrected one I posted in this thread.

@HeptorColeslaw did you check/accept/reject/modify the suggested corrections and changes in the document I uploaded in my previous post? I used LibreOffice's feature to track changes, so you can review them.

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I have not yet received the direct notification I mentioned above.
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I am working on this revision at the moment.
I will contact Solormoriah directly once I finished.
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I finally got around to adding the corrections from lars_alexander.

@lars_alexander: Thank you very much for that. Your error corrections are almost completely taken over by me and your comments were spot on.

I have just uploaded the r21-de4 version to my showcase and to the "German Translation" Dropbox.
I will inform Solomoriah again directly about the new version.
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I did some minor fixings and cosmetics. New version is now: r21-de5
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Just took a look at your -de5 file. I'm afraid, as I don't have the old fonts loaded anymore, that you will have to do the layout; this is a painful job, I know. The title page needs to be fixed so that all credits are on it, and to do that you'll have to shrink the title page artwork. This hurts me as much as it does you, but it's how we have to do it.

The second page contains what I assume are translation notes for the use of the GM. I'd prefer to have this information not be in italics.

I haven't reviewed beyond the first pages yet; don't wait for me to do so, as I have a lot on my plate.

I'm going to post your -de5 on the Downloads page. Let me know when you upload a new release, and thanks!
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Re: AA1 Adventure Anthology One - German Translation

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Announcing!

AA1 Adventure Anthology One German Translation, Release 21-de5 -- August 09, 2020
Here's a new release of this multimodule in German, with thanks to translator Peter Schäfer.

https://basicfantasy.org/downloads.html#aa1
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