Chrysogon's Coterie - 288 NPCs for your Campaign

[toddlyons]

BTW are these characters in any sort of order?

Nope. There's no order required except for the 9th Level Thief who wrote the book. He must remain the very last character listed.

Also, that does mean that the order of classes by level -- cleric, fighter, magic-user, thief -- should also remain. It's alphabetical anyway, so I assumed that wouldn't change.

Thanks for banging this with your Smeghammer +3, Chris.

[toddlyons]

Release 7, with editing from Chris and more typos I found and fixed, is now attached to the first post.

[Solomoriah]

I understood the level, then class hierarchy; I'm just asking about the order within each group of 8.

[toddlyons]

For sure. It's only Chrysogon who is immovable.

It looks great, by the way. There was one blank page, but I left it. I'm sticking with text errors.

[Solomoriah]

Dang, missed a blank. But this isn't final layout, after all.

[toddlyons]

Revision 8 corrects some errors introduced from the recent restyling. Some words were somehow truncated, and I'd missed a few that had lost boldface or italics in the copy-over. I think I've caught them all.

[Solomoriah]

Not sure what happened with truncated words, but the bold, underline, etc. is my fault. Sorry.

[toddlyons]

Not sure what happened with truncated words, but the bold, underline, etc. is my fault. Sorry.

Oh, heck no. You made it look like a real book. I'm thankful!

It also gave me another chance at a complete read-through just to make sure I was (temporarily) satisfied with the wording. There were a number of mini-bios that really stuck-out as sub-par, but they were the best I could do in the moment. I changed them.

[chiisu81]

Looks great so far With the updated/larger headings for the PC names, I'd like to still have the magic items and spells bolded per the style guide.
Also, full page-breaks are good for each NPC level, but I don't think they're needed for the different classes in each level; column breaks (if even those) would work.
If we wanted to add some artwork, I'd recommend the portraits that John has done.
Finally, don't forget to fix the header on the last page (still showing "My Adventure").

[toddlyons]

If we wanted to add some artwork, I'd recommend the portraits that John has done.

We definitely do. I just sent John my Christmas wish list.