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Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2017 7:27 am
by chiisu81
Al (and others), here's R16.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:07 pm
by AlMan
Edits for DC1 – Tales from the Laughing Dragon r16

Page 3 – Kobold Hunting Party stat block
Monster stats are in parenthesis.

Page 12 – Mercenary Guards stat block
Monster stats are in parenthesis.

Page 16 – 10E. Surprise! - Orc Archer stats
spelling
Currently:
bow
Suggest:
shortbow

Page 24 – 4. Commander’s Office – Girck stats
The magic weapons are bolded in the other areas.

Page 27 – 9. The Keeper of the Catacombs – Zombie stats
Monster stats have a closing parenthesis.

You should look through the posts so others, like Tommie Brander, that deserve it get proofing credit too.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 7:18 am
by chiisu81
Good catches as always Al! Thanks for pointer on proofing credits, didn't realize your name wasn't there either. :oops: Found one other lone parenthesis, so I'm gonna do one more pass on the statblocks and then I think we'll be good for new release.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:09 am
by chiisu81
R17 emailed to Solo.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2017 7:46 am
by chiisu81
R17 posted by Solo.
This print release candidate includes corrections by Al Vetter and James Lemon

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2017 2:04 pm
by chiisu81
R17 looks good. Unless someone else spots something in the near future, I think we'll be good for a new print release.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2017 9:24 am
by Solomoriah
One week from today, at the earliest. So April 18th, maybe.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 10:56 am
by chiisu81
Looks like this should be good for new print release.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 3:47 pm
by Solomoriah
Uploading to Lulu now, then CreateSpace. This means that this document will be offline on CreateSpace from tonight until sometime over the weekend.

Re: DC1 Tales from the Laughing Dragon

Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 5:09 pm
by Solomoriah
Live on Lulu.com as of now. Waiting for review on CreateSpace.com.