AA1 Adventure Anthology 1

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I've applied the edits jhhoffmann provided and will be posting R15 soon...
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Gold in the Hills still says Introduction in the header.
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Dang. It looks good on the screen right before I generate the PDF.

I'll have to watch it directly next time. Well, this one has some flow issues still.

Take a look and see if any art (including maps) appears to be missing, would you?
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All other images, maps, etc. look good. While hammering out things, it was pointed out that the pipe beast monster wasn't really explained; does it need to be added at the end of Merilla's Tower as a new creature? If so it's in the New Monsters doc.
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R16:
Page 54 - image is too low :)
Page 75 and 76 - images/maps missing
OGL page - may as well update copyright date for BFRPG to 2016
OGL page - need to insert copyright line for Field Guide below BFRPG
Page 42 - while spells names are normally not capitalized, in this list it looks weird not to be
Insect Valhalla - does a note to see the Field Guide need to be with each entry/encounter, or can it just be a one-time note at the beginning like most adventures do?
Pages 5, 8, 9, 10, 13, 17, 19, 21, 22, 41, 43 - magic items are bold but not capitalized
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Missing images are a constant battle with Libreoffice, I'm sad to say. You have to use the F5 dialog to find and reactivate them. I went through on R16 and gave them all meaningful names so I can find them more easily.
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R17 emailed to Solo.
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Downloading it now. I'll get a PDF built and upload both to the main Downloads page, maybe tonight. I have a convention to get ready for tomorrow, so I may not have time.
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This new release includes further edits by James Lemon. This is not a print release candidate, as there are flow issues with the first adventure that may require artwork to fix.
I'm not seeing any flow issues, just me?
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Sorry. Too many large white spaces in Merilla's Magic Tower to suit me. Was unable to hammer out a better layout.
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